Dossier - Erron 'Joker' Bartton

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Dossier - Erron 'Joker' Bartton

Post by Nightmare2125 » 13 Aug 2017, 02:05

Image 1. Name (Last, First, Middle)
Bartton, Erron, Edward

2. Social Security No.
102-02-6542

3. Department, Branch
Department of the Navy, United States Colonial Marine Corps (USCM)

4.a. Grade, Rate, or Rank

Private First Class

4.b. Pay Grade
E-2

5.a. Date of Birth (YYYYMMDD)
2167-10-22

5.b. Age
19

6. Place of entry into Active Duty
Marine Recruit Depot, California, USA

7. Last/Current Duty, Command, or Station
USS Almayer

8. Decorations, Medals, Badges, Citations, and Campaign Ribbons Awarded or Authorized
1: National Service Defence Medal (NDSM)
2: Colonial Marine Expeditionary Medal (CMEM)
3: Hypersleep Deployment Medal [Bronze star for 100+ Miles] (HDM)
4: Marksmen Ribbon [Expert]

9. Remarks
PFC Bartton shows promise as a future Team Leader, Squad Leader, and perhaps. Sergeant Major.

10. Signiture of Enlistment
Erron E. Bartton
USMC OEF Combat Vet
0331 Machine Gunner
2010-2016

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Re: Dossier - Erron 'Joker' Bartton

Post by Nightmare2125 » 13 Aug 2017, 02:12

First Time I've ever done something like this, so harsh feedback totally welcomed lol
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Re: Dossier - Erron 'Joker' Bartton

Post by Martzin » 13 Aug 2017, 02:54

I like the way you wrote this mate.
The dude who plays Murdoch Machowicz, whoever he is.
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Re: Dossier - Erron 'Joker' Bartton

Post by Nightmare2125 » 13 Aug 2017, 03:33

Martzin wrote:I like the way you wrote this mate.
Thanks, man, appreciate it.
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