Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

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Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Minimike » 06 Apr 2018, 01:02

Byond ID: Minimike1220

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Victor Rennem

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name): Marcellus

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (viewtopic.php?f=57&t=14417)?

Yes, I have read and understand the Synthetic guidelines.

Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer):
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How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)?

Marcellus would not wish to engage in conversation with the marines, unless necessary, or ordered, as he would feel himself to be an outcast, not one of the squad-mates, or shipside friends.

How familiar are you with support roles? (ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO)

Medical - I am trained on medical, other than surgery, but that can be easily found on the wiki
Engineering - Well versed
Science - It's all roleplay, so yes.
Command Skills/Leadership - Decent

Why should we whitelist you?


I would add in another role for the marines to experience, further constructing the universe around them (In terms of roleplay). I would also fill in for any missing roles. I have also been a long-term player of Colonial-Marines and have contributed as a staff member, quite a while ago.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?

Negatory.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

Not that I'm aware.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?


I do.

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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Jakkkk » 06 Apr 2018, 01:40

Does he feel like an outcast or does he act like one?
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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Minimike » 06 Apr 2018, 02:03

He was treated like an outcast in his earlier work, so he acts distant from all the buddy-buddy type stuff.

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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by oprayx73 » 06 Apr 2018, 17:51

Isolationist kind of gimmick is interesting, but by design you are meant to be able to interact when told to; as long as you can do that, i don't see why this synthetic personality would not be viable.

Bring up your ingame skill; moreso surgery specifically because you would be surprised what % of your time spent as a synthetic would be spent in an OR.
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Post by Adralimas » 08 Apr 2018, 19:54

I remember victor rennem from bloody old hippie station, Ex staff i believe! Eitherway +1!
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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Jakkkk » 08 Apr 2018, 20:53

Are you saying because of previous experiences he now acts like an outcast or was he programmed to be more like that?

He can't feel like an outcast because he can't feel, if he believe it improves morale for him to be distant and off on his own that's completely fine. A synth could be surrounded by MT's for an entire operation and be called a "dumb toaster" but it won't make them want to become distant, because they do not care.
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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Minimike » 08 Apr 2018, 21:08

It was more of a underlying program trait, that became more active when he was treated that way. Synths are programmed to act human-ish, so false emotions are a thing. Otherwise they'd just be working joes.

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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Vampmare » 11 Apr 2018, 16:38

I have not seen you ingame so I'll judge based on the application (likely a timezone issue).

I would have liked the story to show some of your gimmick, as it just seems like a normal synthetic story as I read it. It waesn't a bad story, but the missing personal touch and showing of your quirk does confuse me a little. The way I understand it your synthetic doesn't like interacting and while it's interesting, I just don't see it working ingame. Synthetic are meant to RP and interact with fellow ship crew, but if you want to be isolated why not just roll a normal MT, Doctor or whatever. If you could explain how this quirk would work in an actual game setting, I might change to postive.

My voting is netrual.

Is there any special meaning to the name? It's not typical american or british name as far as I know, so just curious.
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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Minimike » 12 Apr 2018, 15:47

I planned my story around his original "awakening". Also, just because my lack of strewn out conversations with marines doesn't mean I would isolate myself, I would use the me" verb quite often, and that doesn't mean he won't talk to people, he just won't unnecessarily converse. In addition to that, he won't isolate himself, as that wouldn't really help the marines - unless its something such as fixing the engines, but that doesn't take very long - Synthetics are there to assist the mission in as any ways as possible, he will speak if needed, but nothing further, unless of course, the human is not a marine. (Survivor, PoW, CL, et cetera.)

Also, Marcellus was just a roman name generator. I do fancy the way they feel.

I can also write a brief story of him at a later date, showing more of the "isolationist" gimmick, if you'd like.

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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Karmac » 23 Apr 2018, 05:51

The story is well written if a bit hard to read, I more or less skimmed through it to avoid wasting too much time, however the concept of a synth giving up on its purpose to fit in with humans simply because they outright refuse to work with him is great, the story really makes this idea work and I've heard from a few synth players that they aren't treated much better in-game from time to time, way better than just saying you're quirk is you give people the cold shoulder because you were designed like that. Solid +1.
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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by awan » 24 Apr 2018, 09:13

This is a good app from a long time player. I have no issues with this being accepted +1
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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Omicega » 30 Apr 2018, 09:57

Underrated application from a player that deserves more +1s. +1
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Post by Ghostdex » 30 Apr 2018, 10:28

Omicega wrote:
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Underrated application from a player that deserves more +1s. +1
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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Lukey111 » 30 Apr 2018, 10:51

Victor is one of the few people I respect. I like Marcellus' play style, and have a decent # of posts. +1
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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Kavlo » 03 May 2018, 13:42

Story had a good amount of detail, quirk is good as it shows him to be less like a machine and more a machine not trying to fit in due to his knowledge of knowing there is great differences between himself and the marines. Mike has been playing this game for fucking ages I'd be surprised if he didn't know the jobs well. To top it off he's ex-staff so I have atleast some faith he'll be able to follow the rules.

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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by DriedMilk » 08 May 2018, 04:56

He RPs the most annoying character I've ever seen everytime I'm a CO it's mindblowing how Rennem can piss me off no mattter what. Yet, this RP is done well as I truly feel the annoyance his character creates.

The story and quirk are nice and unique and will bring something new to the Synth whitelist.

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Re: Marcellus - Minimike1220's 2nd Synth App

Post by Minimike » 08 May 2018, 15:57

DriedMilk wrote:
08 May 2018, 04:56
He RPs the most annoying character I've ever seen everytime I'm a CO it's mindblowing how Rennem can piss me off no mattter what. Yet, this RP is done well as I truly feel the annoyance his character creates.

The story and quirk are nice and unique and will bring something new to the Synth whitelist.

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Post by NGGJamie » 16 May 2018, 06:13

Accepted

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