Unfortunately, this was my 3rd attempt at writing the story. The first 2 attempts explored something else, but I lost the progress during both attempts because I accidently closed Microsoft word and they weren't recovered. My 3rd attempt was spur of the moment kind of thing and went in a completely different direction than I origionaly intented, so while the rest of the app had been written over a week ago, the story wasn't in line completely with the way the rest of the app explored my character and his motivations. Additionally I had tried to keep the story brief while leaving almost everything to symbolism through subtle emotions and actions. It woud appear that only a few people caught onto what I was getting at with the way I wrote it.
Originally Posted by captainyankee
